• Ira

    Lou, I love your books and articles but not your elevator pitch. The Socratic questioning is not grabbing my attention. I’m not connecting to the story you are telling: I slouch all day and crunches are bad for me. What is so clear in your head (and Cosgrove’s and McGill’s) is that crunches are bad. But as the recipient of the pitch this is news to me and I’m skeptical. Swiss ball crunches while holding a 20 lb place overhead (from NROL) feel great. It’s as if you are telling me spinach is bad for me. What would grab my attention? That if as a future senior citizen I want to be able to walk without a walker, not be confined to a wheelchair, and shtup my wife without herniating a disc then I need to start now and develop a strong, flexible core which is far more than an abdominal six pack.

  • Dave

    “Exacerbate” should never be used in an elevator pitch, lol.

    The pre-head is “A Myth-Busting Fitness Plan for Men and Women Who Want a Strong Core and a Pain-Free Back”.

    The snippet you use on this site is: “A strong, athletic physique, highlighted by a flat midsection with well-defined abdominal muscles, is the goal of everyone who works out, from lifelong gym rats to… ”

    If this were a headline for a sales page I might start with combining these into something like:

    “Who Else Wants To Get Rid Of Back Pain, Build A Rock Solid Core, And Look Great Without Doing A SINGLE Crunch Or Sit-Up?”

    Toning it down a bit, maybe something like this for the elevator pitch:

    “NROL4Abs is a 3-phase plan to build a strong core and a pain free back”

    better to get the audience and benefit up front…

    “NROL4Abs helps men and women build a strong body, solid core and a pain free back with a 3-phase exercise and nutrition program — and without doing a single crunch or sit-up (which by the way have been shown to be exactly what you DON’T want to do)…”

    Not sure you need the material after the “–” but it would likely work well in a salesletter. Also, “strong body, solid core” may be better as “strong core” but I think you probably want to tie some form of whole-body aspect into the pitch.

  • Mike

    I like Dave’s suggestions a lot.

    To build on it…
    “NROL For Abs: The keys to building a strong body and solid core in the path to a pain-free back. The no-crunch, no-situp solution.”

    If you want to combine the two:
    “NROL for Abs: The no-crunch, no situp solution to building a strong body and solid core in the quest for a pain-free back.” Eh, seems kind of wordy. I’d go with my first thought over the second.

    For some strange reason, I like the word “quest” since oftentimes the “pain-free back” seems so elusive.

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    You know, I like the pitch as is. Actually, I read it and thought about how I wanted to go out and buy your books… even though I have been meaning to do that anyway. It worked on me though!

  • Bonnie

    You had me at “no crunches,” lol. I’ve always hated them because they kill my neck and shoulders.

    You could try this: strengthens your core and improves your posture like pilates claims to, but uses exercises even normal people can do.

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